Monster!!
by Andrew, Age 8, From New York, USA
Devin was playing computer.
He loved to listen to the music on it. THUMP! THUMP! THUMP!
“Ugh!” he thought. “Why does my older brother have to play his drums so loud?”
He ran upstairs. “Eddie!” he shouted. “Why do you have to do your drums so loud?!”
“Oh sorry,” Eddie said.
He ran back downstairs.
THUMP! THUMP! THUMP!
“Eddie!” He ran upstairs. Eddie was staring out of the window, face white in terror.
Devin looked out the window and almost fainted. There it was; a huge, hulking, green blob, with three gigantic, yellow tentacles coming out and orange spikes everywhere! And five massive, muscly arms!
It was a tsunami, as it spit drool out, that wrecked cars and covered streets!
It was a tornado as it crushed houses beneath its palms!
Devin knew he had to do something. He had to fight! He went outside and started charging the monster! His brother joined him by chucking his drums and drumsticks at the monster. His mom grabbed the broom and started poking it.
Seeing their bravery, the rest of the town started fighting!
The news spread quickly, and soon, all of UTAH was fighting!
Utah called in other states, like California, Texas and Louisiana. Soon, the whole COUNTRY was in! The Continent! The WORLD!!!
Aliens from Jupiter came, and started attacking the monster with the next generation Ion cannons and Plasma bombs!
I ain’t saying who won, but all the people lived happily ever after…
In the monster’s stomach!
- THE END -
September 01, 2011 at 10:31 pm, Margot said:
Andrew – I love your story and the illustration! Keep it up, we are looking forward to more of you fabulous talent
September 05, 2011 at 1:05 am, Rebecca Colby said:
Fantastic story, Andrew! And you can draw too! Great job!
October 20, 2011 at 7:31 am, Stephanie Olsen said:
What a great ending Andrew! You gave me a good laugh.
October 26, 2011 at 6:26 pm, Sara L. Marion said:
I thought this was great. Have a good time with your stories, you can be a good story teller.